Adding detail to the end of sentences

WALT adding detail to the end of sentences

Children had to stay inside at lunchtime on Friday because of heavy rain,thunder and lighting.

Akiko works in a sushi bar where she sells sushi to customers all around the world.

My hungry tummy is rumbling! after our two laps around the school.

Adding Detail To The Middle Of Sentences

W.A.L.T- Adding detail to the middle of sentences.

Baleen whales are toothless whales that eat    plankton,there are two types of plankton  and one of them is called a zoo plankton which is a animal one and the other one is called a phytoplankton that is the plant one ,they also eat little animals like krill.

Learning my times tables like my 1s, 2s, and 3s help me so I can be super smart,times tables a also very important.

Playtime is so fun because that’s the time we don’t have to learn and we get to play and it is a bit late because most schools have theirs at ten thirty our time is at 11 am.

All the year 5 and 6 children at Pt England school  have their very own learning tool which is called net-books.

Children from Pt England school had to stay inside their classrooms because of the heavy rain at lunchtime on Friday.

Writing Sentences

WALT - Adding detail to the beginning of sentences

6.Did you know that I have a best friend named Akiki that works in a sushi bar?

After a really long Swimming lesson at the pools, my hungry tummy was rumbling.

Antarctic Food Chain

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Here is a little movie me and my friends have done about an Antarctic food chain.

A food chain is  a chain of animals that eat each other.

Here are the animals in the food chain. Phyto plankton,Zoo plankton,Fish,Penguin,seal And A Killer Whale.

Aeroplane venn diagram

Here is some work  I did , it is about the difference between a Hercules plane and a Air New Zealand plane.

My Writing In litreacy class

W.A.L.T Add  detail  to  the end of sentences.

Antarctic seals have a thick layer of blubber under their skin,so they can survive the cold when it comes to winter.

During winter,the sun does not rise in Antarctica, so it will stay dark for about four or three months pitch black.

Leopard seals prey on Antarctic penguins, that is why they are called predators.

My Writing

WALT:To add detail in the middle of sentences.

here is a picture of my principal Mr Burt he is the best principal in the world.

As we look in the fruit bowl we see that the pears have spots called speckles.

Mr Burt, who loves kids and is a very good guitar player, takes assemblies on Fridays.

Lots of people from different   countries love to come and  visit  the beautiful Auckland city  in New Zealand.

Mr Burt takes assemblies, where  the whole school comes together to learn new things on Fridays.

Mr Burt, who loves kids and is a very good guitar player, takes assemblies on Fridays.

My Antarctic Penguins Venn diagram

My writing goal

When I write paragraphs I am learning to write some complex sentences which have more detail.

In Antarctica there a animals called predators.They are called that for a reason.Why they're  called that is because they eat,kill and hunt  other animals.

Predators can be dangerous around their enemies so it can get quite messy.It can also get a little bloody.Some of the killing animals are a killer whale and a leopard seal.

Did you know that a killer whale eats squid,dolphins,seals and penguins?And a leopard seal eats penguins.