Monday, 10 June 2013

My writing goal

When I write paragraphs I am learning to write some complex sentences which have more detail.

In Antarctica there a animals called predators.They are called that for a reason.Why they're  called that is because they eat,kill and hunt  other animals.

Predators can be dangerous around their enemies so it can get quite messy.It can also get a little bloody.Some of the killing animals are a killer whale and a leopard seal.

Did you know that a killer whale eats squid,dolphins,seals and penguins?And a leopard seal eats penguins.

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