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Wednesday 12 June 2013

My Writing

WALT:To add detail in the middle of sentences.

here is a picture of my principal Mr Burt he is the best principal in the world.
As we look in the fruit bowl we see that the pears have spots called speckles.


Mr Burt, who loves kids and is a very good guitar player, takes assemblies on Fridays.


Lots of people from different   countries love to come and  visit  the beautiful Auckland city  in New Zealand.


Mr Burt takes assemblies, where  the whole school comes together to learn new things on Fridays.
Mr Burt, who loves kids and is a very good guitar player, takes assemblies on Fridays.









1 comment:

  1. Hay Brooklyn great story about the picture. You Got a lot of details and make sure you don't forget to add capital letters to your sentences !!

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